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Daisy1

Your voice

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Daisy1

Your voice

Your voice is like a whip it hurts

Black, angry and loud

Your voice is like a whip

The parts of me gone are unseen

Your voice is like a whip

My chest gets tight , breathing tough

Your voice is like a whip

One raised tone and we wait stock still

Your voice is like a whip

As we wait for it to strike us

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Daisy1

A great poem. It sounds sad and like you are in an abusive relationship.

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